You've spent literal years writing your book... Now what?
Do you:
A) Edit it some more
B) Set it on fire
C) Cold pitch 30 agents with a query letter that doesn't really sell it
D) Put it in a drawer for now because if it gets rejected your heart will literally break
If any of those sound familiar you’re not alone
Going from draft to deal is confusing, there's way too much advice, most of it's American and half of it's contradictory
This self paced course includes individual feedback on your work/submission and will help you put your best foot forward and
Give yourself and your work the best possible chance of success
Pitch, Please is for you if...
✅ You’re ready to pitch, but the process feels like a black box (or a rejection machine)
✅ You’ve sent a few pitches... and heard nothing back
✅ You want to make sure your pitch is actually saying what you think it is
✅ You need feedback, not just on your query, but on what might be missing in your opening extract
✅ You want to stop second-guessing and start submitting with confidence
✅ You’ve done the hard part (writing the book!) and want to give it the best shot at landing
✅ You want expert, emotionally intelligent feedback without the fluff
✅ You’re worried your book might be 'not quite ready'... but you don’t know why
Imagine this...
✨ You know exactly how to talk about your book in a way that feels easy and engaging and true to the work
✨ You’ve got a clear plan for querying, ie you're not just crossing your fingers and hoping for the best
✨ You feel confident your manuscript is ready and you're putting your best foot forward
✨ You're hitting send with confidence, not because you're completely fearless, but because you're prepared
What you get
A step-by-step system for pitching your book, so you always know what to do, when to do it, and how to do it well
Templates and real examples to help you write query letters, verbal pitches, and one-liners that actually sound like you
Short, engaging video lessons that break down the pitching process simply
A clear submission plan so you're not just winging it or hitting send out of panic
Topics we cover include:
– How to write a great hook when your book isn't that hook-y
– What makes story structure strong (and sellable)
– Query letters that make sense and sound like you
– Finding agents who are a good match
– Submission timelines, strategy, and follow-ups
– What to do when someone says yes
– How to manage your response when someone says no
What it's not
❌ A promise of a book deal
❌ A generic template-fest
❌ A course where you watch and never apply
This is real support for real writers who are ready to finish strong.
Join now and get instant access to:
- 18 short, punchy video lessons
- Transcripts, slidepacks, worksheets and other resources
- 1:1 coaching session including feedback on 5,000 words (valued at $797)
Price: one off payment of $497 AUD
Prefer to pay in installments?
Cool, cool.
You get all the same stuff but pay $200 per fortnight for three fortnights
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Who's running this show?
I write books, draw cartoons and co-hosted The First Time podcast.
I’m also a writing coach.
Across all stages of my writing life, from hopeless to emerging to debut and beyond, I’ve had neurosis I wanted to share I’ve wanted someone on my corner. Someone that had done the things I wanted to do, to be invested in me and my career, to provide advice and feedback on my specific situation.
Now, having published multiple books here and overseas, interviewed 100+ debut/best selling/award winning writers on writing, publication and the head game of a writer, I’m that person for other people.
I help writers wanting to be published and writers who are about to be published know what to do to give themselves and their work the best possible chance of success.